this ended a little bit too abruptly , so much so that i was disappointed . i actually really liked where it was going and thought that i was going to rate this as good , but i can only rate this as fine now . the art is good , and the premise is interesting , and overall i was enjoying it . but that ending , i just wanted to know way more , it felt like too soon of an ending . even another extra page would have helped maybe , though more than that would have been ideal . i don'tfeel a sense of resolution or conclusion or anything . . . but like i said , i did enjoy most of it and the art was pretty . maybe read it yourself and tell me if you feel let down , if im right or if im asking too much / overreacting . its pretty short anyways