Perverted Love and Secret · review
In some aspects, the storytelling IS good. This can be said as one of the earlier iterations of stalkerxstalker subgenre of BL, and even then it takes good care exploring the various ways people stalk, going so far as to include moments that are often glossed over by other works. In some aspects, though, it can feel too much. The way it swerves between portraying genuine attempts of stalking and showing a cute heartfelt romance feels a bit too drastic, the whiplash a bit too hard. Moments of guilt and anguish are present, yes, but they are framed quickly as an obstacle to be overcome instead of consequenceof a crime, and yeah, the gap is too big for me.
Art looks nice though, and smut is decently lewd.