I don't know my full opinion on this. I enjoy the first half of it. Afterwards it get's kind of eh and seems to lose some focus. Things i don't like are the Mother in this. She just comes across as annoying and frustrating when on screen. She comes across as something you'd expect to find in those cliched stereotypical people that are always against same sex relationships. In fact this story has a lot of issues with characters just being something you'd find from stereotypical stories people make up. Another example that is a good evidence is the female that wants to be a male inthe story. First i want to state that i don't like this character being i find her to be a badly created character. She is the type of character that is always exaggerated as being a victim and never has any actual character.

The way the story goes about is just sad and depressing and it's not how the story is meaning to make it come across.

I don't know how to properly explain it but it's just not fun to read this girl's story.

Something i think they could've done somewhat interesting to make it a decent subplot. Is have it so the character is a Women that Likes Women, As a result she is ostracized by her family that is a very controlling group of people. They see her as a disgrace and will only allow her to date other women by being a man and telling her to get a sex change. As she starts interacting with the two MC's she will start to realize that she doesn't need to change her body to please her parents and decides to be an Open Yuri lover. She then starts living her life as a women while openly admitting she likes women. This is the only way i can see a story doing a decent job at it and even then i don't know how it turn out. None of the people in this seem to even have any sense of how Japanese people react to things like wanting to change ones Gender.

Something i like and dislike is the size of one of the MC's. She has the size of someone from Pre-School. It doesn't even make sense that she's like this because she started not getting the Nutrients she needs to grow tell she was 14. She should have an appearance of a 14 year old and not a little kid. I find it just sad that she now has this small body. Would've liked if she started actually growing once she started eating normally ( Even if it's unrealistic) Or just have her have the appearance of a High School student.

But i do kind of like this cause it give the two MC's a Mother & Daughter type of relation. Wish they did more with this. The Kid looking MC doesn't even seem to care too much about not having a mother sense childhood. It could've been interesting to see how the Adult appearance MC reacts to suddenly having someone the size of child start seeing her as a mother figure. Even seeing the Kid MC react to starting to treat her Friend/Lover as a mother.

Also i don't like the thing with the reason her being in debt because of her Uncle. She had to pay her uncle money because he scammed her . They resolve this but she doesn't get any of the money she's given her Uncle.

Overall it's a fun story, But near the end it starts showing problems. Hopefully i wont get lambasted now,,,