It's an extremely interesting idea, after all, wanting to modify a work that everyone has probably wanted, so a hentai that explores this simple concept is cool, concept 8/10 How the story is developed is interesting because the essence of the original story is still just changing the events/points story 6/10 Art is generic, nothing specialart 5/10

The protagonist is horrible after all he ends up disgracing the work with a troubled thought, I think if it had a minimally decent protagonist it would be cool

character 2/10

in general it could be better if it was better developed, and if it had a spirit of consideration for little red riding hood