It's cute, funny, and super cliché. My biggest issue with it is the father. Fathers who are jealous of their daughters' love lives are not normal. It's incest, and they are a bad father. Her father was happy that she got her heart broken and didn't even try to cheer her up. Only asked where his chocolate was. Then he got jealous over the robot he made for his daughter HIMSELF. He is not protective; he is just controlling. I loved the robot's skills, though. His missile-shooting arm and rocket feet. It was hilarious when he tried to shoot missiles at the girl's crush. Idon't like when characters kiss in the first chapter, but it was a one-shot, so it's understandable. Except for the father, the characters were cliche but good. It's a short, fun read.