I surprisingly enjoyed this. The first couple chapters aren't all that interesting, But it get's better. The characters are pretty interesting and it doesn't really have any annoying characters. Only thing that kind of bugs me is that i wish that this wasn't a game. When they come out of the game it really takes me out of the story. I wish it was something like maybe a god trapping them in a world based off the game with everyone having their characters as who they are. When they are fighting or someone puts their life on the line to safe someone, It really isn't thatheart pounding because in the end it's just a video game.

I think if the people were playing and one day a god decides to bring everyone to a world with the same mechanics ( I.E Respawn, Quest, Health Bars) And everyone is now their character from ingame. Also keep the funny and goofy tone going for the story. Even if this sounds cliched, I think it would improve the story.

I do like the MC, But only when he is in his female avatar. I also like the MC's female avatar design.

There is also Magi. She is one of the better characters and i like that the MC and her kind of have a relationship going on. It's suggested multiple times and i would love it ( I think it'd be better if everyone was turned into their actual characters) Also who can say no to some Yuri action ?

Good story overall.