OK, I'm gonna try my hardest to be nice here since it's a one shot. Story: 2 Basic premise of this is that some lolicon-lover guy (I'm assuming that's the case) makes his little brother crossdress. Then the younger one wants to cut his hair and they bicker for a whole 9 pages about it until he lets him. Why? Seriously though. Some perverted older brother makes his little brother crossdress? That's so... stupid. I know one shots aren't known for their amazing plots, but that's bad. I'm surprised that the older brother didn't grab the other one's butt or something and say "Whoops, thought you really werea girl for a second".
Art: 4
The art's passable. Nothing super fantastic about it. Kinda your typical shoujo look with a bit of shounen mixed in... Reminds me of Azumanga Daioh's style.
Characters: 1
What can I say. There's two characters that are completely lame. One's a pervy guy that forces his brother to crossdress, the other one's the little brother that's forced to be a tranny for his brother's sake. Nothing to see here.
Enjoyment: 1
Do you have to ask? It was 9 pages of boredom. No enjoyment, just read it for the sake of it in about 2 minutes. I regret my decision.
Overall: 2
Here's my one-sentence summary:
If you like one-shots, this is one you should skip. Unless all you love in a manga is gender-bender and implied incest. Then this is for you.