Ugh, nothing natural about the development of the story at all. Nothing even makes sense. One guy is a huge playboy and flirts nonstop to this stranger girl. The girl likes the guy cuz he is hot, fine. But another guy appears and is the typical guy who "fights" with the girl all the time that they probably will fall for each other or whatever. But to speak so casually and familiarly with each other despite they just got to know each other the day or whatever before is weird. THERE IS NO BUILDUP AT ALL LIKE WTH. the drawing is fine tho, some guys actuallydo look hot. i like the fact that the girl knows she likes the hot guy cuz he is hot and she accepts his advances, but the rest feels forced to me.