3.5/10 Welcome back to another erotica that strives to show titties and perverted scenes under the pretense of plot. I’m not going to sugarcoat or lie about anything, I am a certified erotica hater. However, there are some eroticas that I do enjoy due to them having a sound story, but this is definitely not one of those rare breeds. The pacing/world-building of this manga just screams low-effort, as the manga inserts random scenes and concepts here and there, and it’s almost like the author forgot to explain them, so he decides to do it through a flashback when the information isn’t as relevant. It’s justsome really lazy and sloppy writing that could’ve been fixed if the author inserted the scene sooner instead of relying of flashbacks.
As for the characters — they are all unbelievably horny because… gender-bent world! Woo! In other words, a low-effort excuse and plot design to draw boobs. Also, it doesn’t help that the mc is a pathetic loser who doesn’t even act like a male. “Oh no, shiver me timbers, I’m so scared of boobies!”
With another note on the mc, his drive to make money doesn’t even make sense. He’s not well-written or consistent at all. For example, he was a uni student that hated his life, but now he wants to go back? Okay, sure… maybe if the author mentioned family or some other circumstances, but the author can’t think that much.
Do you like uninspired stories with wimpy mcs that never do anything with their life? Yeah… I thought so.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”