It had a really nice concept for the plot, but the execution wasn't great and the ending and the plot weren't very interesting. The relationship between the mc girl and boy I didn't think was cute I found it a little sickening. Obviously it's short so it feels a little rushed maybe that's why. Give it a chance I guess, it's not trash. I rated it a 4 cos of the relationship but in reality it would probably be a 6. The art is nice, bit generic but that's fine. The characters weren't unlikeable but not particularly special. Very generic characters but it was entertaining fora short story.