The Beloved Incompetent Stepmom · review
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This review may discuss plot details.
Not all story has to be original or unique. This story is one solid example of that. As far as a childcare story is concerned, the first half of the story is what I expected from the genre. Nothing groundbreaking, but everything is well-told and well-written. It has some patience in its pacing, with the story lovingly indulging in its world and the family bonding instead of rushing to move the plot. That's plenty enough for me to stick around. First thing I do want to point out is that I particularly enjoy that how this story takes its time fleshing out some of the world, givingcommoners and servants a much bigger role than just walking decorations while also letting the main (noble) protagonists engage in the larger world outside their mansion. While the spotlight is still rather limited, the amount remains a lot more than some of the other OI/RoFan I've read.
I'm also enjoying how warm and kind most of the narrative is. Our main characters do use that Duke of the North-esque 'mess with my family and you're DEAD', but it's paired with the glowing warmth of a Japanese shoujo that is not treated as a passing mention. The story cares for the good people, whether that's nobles or commoners or servants alike, and I find myself feeling warm while reading it.
Some praise must also be made for the art. On top of an abundance of ice special effect, there's also more attention paid to certain details like NPCs and dresses. The art here still uses assets, for sure, but they blend it better than most title.
The children are SO ADORABLE FLUFFY CHEEKS AND BIG EYES AND WIDE SMILES AGHHHHHH--yeah, you get what I mean. But they're more than just cuties. They're given room to be more than just cuties. They got to learn, to grow, to make friends, to do something by themselves, and as much as it's ordinary, it's also well-executed.
I like Elsha, the MC. She's a common brand of Japanese RoFan protagonist; the eternally optimistic and sweet plucky girl, but she has a bit more wisdom and intelligence with her. The narrative fully knows that she is the warm, sun-like core of this story, and it refuses to let us forget. But barring issues of her own romance, the narrative also gives her surprising moments of lucidity where she understands the precarious circumstances of herself and her new family. This balance fleshes out Elsha's character, gives her more to do than just trucking through plots and ploys.
Rolf, the ML... is okay, a bit generic. He doesn't really offer anything new for a Duke of the North type of ML. Much of his character and his background are still veiled in shadows, even 120+ chapters in, and as such I don't really get to know him that well.
I actually liked a lot of the other NPCs more than Rolf, tbh. Like Rolf's parents or Idna, Rolf's cousin who starts off in the jealous villainess type but ends up being Elsha's best friends. Heck, at this point, the two children feels like a more fleshed out character than Rolf even though he's the one who often moves the plot along.
The budding romance between Elsha and Rolf is indulgent, with plenty of touching and skinship and intimacy and blushing faces. But at the same time, it's REALLY restrained; with the characters never really opening up or admitting their feelings beyond "I'm going to protect and care for you because you are family". This kind of slowburn is fine for like, 30 chapters. But 120 chapters have gone and the romance haven't solidified (It is only in the newest chapter that Rolf kisses Elsha knowingly without any shenanigans ) and not gonna lie, the romance has stopped feeling cute and starts getting frustrating.
...But then the story starts aspiring to be more (derogatory).
Granted, I'm a bit biased here. I've been enjoying so much of the first half that I wished the story could just add MORE. This is my own skewed expectations speaking.
Like, we know the story has something to hide from the very start. There's untold pain that lurks in the background, there's jealous emperors and dead parents and lurking rumors. Cool, nbd, that's a nice texture to a heartwarming story. But.
In the second half of the story, the narrative ramps that side of the story without changing much of the storytelling. Both Elsha and us, the readers, are still being kept in the dark regarding numerous important information related to Rolf and house Iceberg. And the story still refuses to tell us anything about it, no. They just keep adding new characters, new plot threads, new tension, new love rivals without EVER resolving any of the threads they have spread before, INCLUDING Rolf and Elsha's romance.
That particular move ends up being very frustrating, because as it is the story lacks the foundation to tell that political story of intrigue and imperial secrets and whatnot. The weight of the mysteries stops making me feel like "oh no what's actually happening I'm so curious" and starts making me feel "God, just get it over with."
Doubly so when the story starts adding redemption arcs to characters that don't really need it ( Elsha's father ) for the sake of supposedly making the narrative more gray and complex. But again, without filling in the MORE IMPORTANT secrets and troubles (just what IS the Icebergs' curse?) all of these feels like cheap distraction.
On top of everything, all of these politicking also significantly reduces the amount of childcare scenes, pushing even the children to act a lot more seriously during the last 20 chapters or so. On one hand it's good for the characters, really, it adds layers and textures, but... the tension is too much and not in a good way.
I'm not...trying to drag this story down, really. Even in recent chapters the storytelling is still pretty decently paced, the romantic scenes are abundant, and both the actions and the special effects are really, really charming. The ongoing narrative right now is definitely not as frustrating as some other titles I've been reading for a while.
But yeah, I'm still feeling BLAH. Will probably leave the story to cook for a while before binging through it.