Aoi Nanase isn't really known for being a good mangaka. She's a decent illustrator when she's doing magazine pin ups of girls look cute, but she isn't known for story boarding, story writing, backgrounds, or anything other than trying to make the girls cute. This happens to be a 15 page short story which about 2 sentences worth of plot. 2 very short sentences. This might be a little fun as an omake to some other story, but I don't understand how this is supposed to work as a stand alone story. It's actually really hard to write this review, since there is so littlecontent to speak of that I can't find much to say.