This was a fun read. My biggest complaint is that there were too many characters relative to the length, so keeping track of all the names turned into a hassle before long. The characters were kind of meh, but they had a good amount of chemistry. Takumi and Ayaka or whatever the hell her name was had a quaint little story covering their past. Overall it was alright. Nothing too special but nothing awful. I think that increasing the length by 5-10 chapters and keeping the contained story the same would've made it much more diguestible. More art and whatnot. It wasn't really rushed andthe pacing wasn't really wrong but there should've just been more illustrations during this story.