the story is next to non existent, the art does everything it has to to be good but nothing more the characters are around for so little i wondered am i even surprise to care about them. i am looking at this as a oneshot. and as a oneshot this is a complete failure. its only about as long as a normal manga chapter, considering most oneshots are around 40 pages, some significantly more, some a bit less, but they are self contained stories. this one ends as fast as it begins. its like some guy was SO confident that it would be a manga he didn't even thinkmore had to be done.

and also as a manga this would have failed. its overly generic and doesn't have the spark that makes other generic things live.

the only reason that i gave this a 5 is because it had a mildly amusing joke, and its not that long of a read.