Please kiss me Yowamushi-kun! · review
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This review may discuss plot details.
The idea/plot for the first story wasn't bad and could have became something good, it could have been a cute story if it was longer and if it wasn't for the fact that the uke is drawn smaller and like a kid during the s3x scene. Then there is the matter of the fact that the uke is older than the seme which is in high school. It doesn't even mention what grade, but the uke is an adult which also doesn't mention his age but we know he is of drinking age because he ordered alcohol and got drunk off of it. Not tomention the flow of the story in their romance seemed like in chapter 2 it went backwards after making it seem like they moved pretty quick in chapter 1. It just wasn't a flow to their relationship not to mention the drunk scene, one moment the uke is out of it but then he is aware enough to consent.
Then 3rd chapter where the 2nd story starts, it mentions the main guy being 31 and when I skipped a few pages I notice the ML also looks small and young. I dropped it after that since it gave pedo vibes.