Dungeons and Crayons · review
I must acknowledge that my experience of reading childcare stories is rather limited, still. With that in mind, I think [Dungeons and Crayons] (or formerly known as [The Chick-Class Hunter is Filial!]) is a well-written amalgamation of Hunterverse and childcare subgenre of isekai. First of all, let's get the important question clear. From what I can sense so far, this story has a low chance of pulling an Usagi Drop. Yes, there are moments where the adopted dad feels protective about the MC, as well as moments where the dad feels suspicious about a boy who seems to have a crush with MC. There are alsomoments where the other members of MC's guild are pampering her. But I don't sense any romantic or obsessive vibes in those moments. And the only one who visibly has a crush towards MC is a fellow child. This might change in the future, but so far I can attest that the currently out 65 episodes are safe.
Now let's actually begin.
Obviously, the art is immaculate. It's consistent, and it's fricking ADORABLE. The art definitely sells the children perfectly, with chubby blushing cheeks and huge eyes that speaks of both innocence and mischief alike. The adults also look good, if a bit more...standard, in terms of shoujo/OI characters.
The action side of things are pretty dynamic. Effects usage are well-deployed, and anatomy looks clean.
The plot as a whole weaves elements of Hunterverse and childcare stories together. The emotional beats tied around Groo, the MC, are clearly born from childcare stories, but the adults have a much darker and edgier backstory.
I must warn y'all as much as I'm impressed; the backstories are dark and surprisingly grounded. Some are just plain Hunterverse backstories, tied with towers and dungeons and failed raids and whatnot. Others have a more interesting interplay between Hunterverse and modern life circumstances, which in itself offers a nice little tidbit of the society at large. They may not be unique, per se, but everything feels realistically woven. That also means the stakes of the story are actually pretty high.
Where the story shines is in its heartfelt moments, though. Every single story arc is full of warmth and tenderness, and the interaction between characters feel sweet no matter how small.
On this aspect, I do have some concern whether if the childcare heart at its core can shoulder the darker side of the narrative, but so far things look okay.
...The characters are where my judgment starts to get complicated. And...weirdly rambling?
Don't get me wrong, I have little complaints; I find myself enjoying them all right. Joorim, the dad, starts off as a typical Duke of the North but he quickly melts in the face of the sunshine that is Groo. The rest of the guild also goes through a similar progress, changing and growing and improving all thanks to Groo and her hijinks.
And while I haven't read a lot of childcare stories, I am maintaining my expectations. Of course a childcare story with the child as the MC will center its narrative around the child. OF COURSE. And I also understand that with stories that combined multiple genres into one, it's necessary to add familiar elements for readers to latch onto. I expected this. It's...fine?
But at the same time, this level of writing can carry more. I dare say, they SHOULD carry more. The cast could have been fleshed out more and outside their relations with Groo, and it's a bit unfortunate that the narrative chose not to, for one reason or another.
How should I value missed potential?
I find myself asking this question, and it's... quite an odd choice, given that this is a story partly about a toddler cosplaying Walter White in her orphanage.
Then there's Groo herself.
As the MC, Groo is the shining duck at the core, the golden heart. She's totes adorbs, and her efforts to make things better for people around her is as heartwarming as it is hilarious (at times). But right now, there is a strange feedback loop happening between Groo and the narrative.
But at the same time, there are moments where I feel like the narrative is treating Groo as a walking plot device first and foremost. Her fluctuating intelligence makes me realize that Groo has a higher level of artificiality compared to other characters. Much of the plot happens because of Groo, but Groo herself is written to do whatever the plot wants to happen. She moves where the story wants her to move and she acts however the story wants her to act.
"Are you complaining that a fictional character is acting fictional?" Yes, yes I am.
My problem about this feedback loop is not about suspension of disbelief; I am not screaming "THERE IS NO WAY GROO CAN HAVE A DRUG DEALING EMPIRE THIS IS UNREAL WHAT KIND OF STORY IS THIS THE WRITER IS SHIT"-- no, I'm more than willing to suspend my disbelief to bask in the warmth and the adorableness.
My problem about this feedback loop is closer to an uncanny valley. The sweetness around Groo feels too sweet, too perfect that you ends up noticing the hands pulling the strings and how contrived she acts. How fictional.
"Oh, yeah, it's cute alright. The creators really made sure it's cute."
All I wanted is to keep dreaming and sleep, but I'm being woken up against my will.
And it's kind of annoying.
And it's...again, it's kind of funny and odd, how much philosophical question I end up yapping for a story about A GIRL WHO USES A TRICYCLE WHILE DOING DRUG DEALS.
But that means the story makes me feel something. It makes me think. So all in all, I still consider this a very net positive.
And again, it's cute as all heck.