Let me start with the character first. Why? Because personally, this is the only thing that bothers me so much. The main problem is the character build. I don't know, maybe it's because I already watched anime "Bartender" before i read this one-shot. I really disagree with Suna's behavior. He seems totally uninterested with world. I think what bartender should do is not to reveal his/her true self. But in here i feel like seeing another Oreki Houtarou from Hyouka. I admit that he can do his job well, but his "uninterested" eye and "too relaxed" stand really make him less looks like an averageBartender.

Art is fine, temple is tidy, sfx is not too crowded. (ofcourse because it's not totally action). So nothing to be discussed about.

The Story is the main reason i give it a fair score. Simple, not too strong, but unexpected. That's what I like from mystery genre. It can make all readers (not only mystery geek) can understand easily.