This will be similar to my preliminary anime review because of recency bias. Story - 3 The story is the premise and that's it. It's a great, fun premise so I'm not complaining. I've given it a low score because there isn't enough to call a story, and the events - at least initially - don't clearly occur in any particular order. After some chapters, something unexpected happens in the story - which is quite enjoyable. During it and afterward, the events do clearly happen in order. Art - 10 The art is great. It's one of the best parts. In particular, I like how for all chapters, it ismonochrome in the first pages, and then it's myrichrome (myriad) in the main page. The contrast really adds to the enjoyment.
Enjoyment - 10
I've sung it enough praises in the art section, I can't muster up any more.
Overall - 10
For a work in the short format, this is amazing.