The first two chapters were pretty good though, it wasn't the best but it was still a wonderful story. I enjoyed how everything flowed it was wonderful and I really enjoyed read it all. I was not happy how it ended though, it's like beginning a story and getting right into it, than suddenly 'poof' story ends. Just leaves you dangling on a cliff-hanger. The other chapters, 3 + 4 I didn't enjoy as much, they were just different stories. I don't know if it was because I was upset with the orginal ending of Chapter 2 but they were too appreciatable.