Huge fan of Yagi-senpai here. This one shot is not particulrarly good... But it's not bad, neither! You can't develop characters in 50 pages. It's also impossible to show how complex your plot is. As a one shot, it just shows the style that he would use in a longer story, and it's versatility. Yagi does a good aproach there. Story: Not a mind blowing plot, but Yagi can create masterpieces with simple plots. The one shot presents some incoherences, but nothing he can't fix with a new "first" chapter, if serializing. Art: from the first ilustration, Yagi's style is unmistakable. It's just beautifull. Claracter: Meh, nothing interesting to remarkwith such few pages. They'll have time to shine, if this goes on.

Enjoyment: Yagi is back! Enjoyment is over 9000!

Overall: As an independent one shot i'll give it a 5. But in Yagi's hands, this has the potential to become an amazing manga.