Not half bad writing and idea is good. The pace on the other hand is all over the place: It started with just a few basic dungeon rooms with specific cool traps (you will have to read to find out). But then it jumped to making whole dungeons. The change felt entirely unnatural. The start is a nice short read if you want something with a different feel. On the other hand if you have limit time then the related "Maou-sama no Machizukuri! Saikyou no Dungen wa Kindai Toshi" is a better read. Note: My review ignores parts about guys and girls liking each other (ifI didn't 99% of human writing would be in one category).