It's quite a challenge to rank or comment on a one shot, especially since you've been reading much longer stories before and after that. Anyway, It seems kind of all over the place, it's just that I feel like every one shot is rushed (that is logical, but I still don't like it so I am pointing it out). I really liked that it shows boys as emotional beings who cry because, oh well, boys DO cry and they should not be asamed of it or made fun of for that. Honestly, that's the only good thing I'd like to point out about it, not really worththe read (even tho you'll be done in 5-10 mins).
Also, I am not saying that it's bad, just there's absolutely nothing special about it, but it did introduce me to the "henohenomoheji"!