This wasn't what I expected. I was hoping for like...a young man (Hirayama) who strongly desires to become the best erotic manga artist in all of Japan, and is mentored by the one who currently holds that title - the very sexy and talented Sen Moriyama. It is absolutely impossible not to be aroused in Moriyama's presence; she's constantly in her undergarments...or wearing anything sexy and appealing (swimsuit). She uses her own body and perverted nature (as well as others) to inspire her in her work. Hirayama soon works with two other talented artists, Maki Naoko and Kawai Nanami. I really didn't like how muchteasing and fantasizing this story did. I mean, having a sexy half naked woman on top of you, seeing various sexy women in tight outfits as they exercise, splashing their exposed breasts with water on a hot summer day, plenty of sexy women in bikinis and swimwear, bathing naked in a hot spring, showing in the same bathroom, modeling in the nude, trying on different outfits (daring outfits are the beast), etc. - especially the beach story, where Moriyama wore and did stretches in that flashy swimsuit, and competed against that famous volleyball champion. I really just would have preferred if actual erotic and lewd moments happened throughout the story. While I would have kept plenty of the flirting and seducing, as well as keeping Nanami out of the loop (because I don't find "loli" appearing girls appealing) - I would have made Moriyama and Naoko compete for Hirayama's affection; despite him strongly preferring Moriyama. They also could have noticed just how determined and helpful he was...things they look for in a future husband - and of course, he'd have an above average sized "manhood". I also would have Moriyama become obviously jealous whenever Hirayama would show interest in any other girl, or when other girls tried flirting with him. Hirayama may have touched and massaged their bodies...but it wasn't enough. I would also have Erika Misato, and her girls, have some "adult fun" with Hirayama as well - Erika would also be Moriyama's greatest rival in everything...including at trying to win Hirayama's love. But in the end...they all agree to share Hirayama to further explore their erotic, sex capades to expand on their work - which is honestly a total win for Hirayama. And with Moriyama buying the whole company, Hirayama would have one super sugar mama.

And I'll admit, that the artwork was pretty good (reminds me of "Ring x Mama"). Though coloring the pages might have also helped. I don't know if other people will like it, but I suppose they should at least give it a chance.

But as always...these are just my opinions.