The story is a typical super powered guy entering a magic academy in a harem power fantasy. Now, I could just criticize how stereotypical the story is or how bland the characters are. But more than anything else, the mangaka is just... bad. Frames don't flow naturally into other frames, scenes lack the impact that they are suppose to give, characters and motion looks stiff, inconsistency in background/motion lines/sound effects, etc. Some of the background looks good so the mangaka clearly has some drawing skills, but it seems like an assistant drawing their first real manga and have no idea how to write a properstoryboard.