I liked it! The story was basically the synopsis: a guy falls in love with an NPC in a VR dating sim. The art was pretty, Ichi (the NPC) looked especially cute. I feel like the concept was good, and the story as a romance was great, but the mangaka added a bunch of characters and tried to have a message in a few chapters. It was good but I thought the idea could have been expanded on? With more planning I think this manga could even become a full length manga because there is potential. Also the end was kinda predictable and acop-out. Despite the criticism I thought this manga was worth reading. It's rare that bl mangas try to be something more so this is a breath of fresh air.
fyi there's only one sex scene if you're curious.