I can't say I cared much for the first story. It felt awkward and forced. The continuation chapter for the first story was a bit better but I still didn't care for the characters much. The uke was very weak and girly and the seme was, dare I say it, too stoic. I mean, I like stoic semes but this uke and seme were just a bad match. But honestly, I felt it was all worth it when I got to the second story. The second story is great and I wish there was more of it. It focuses on body image issues in acute and funny way. The characters are a much better match than in the first story as well. The uke is pretty stereotypical in the way he acts but not so much in the way in he looks, which the first part deals with. The seme is a usual cool seme, who is desperately trying to keep his cool image in the second part of the story. I felt the author hit a good middle ground with those two and they and the art are really the only reasons I even rated this a 4.