From Maid to Mother · review
This story is a perfect example of why I'm hesitant to read female romance stories. This is just not a great story. The Premise? I actually like. I find it to be interesting. I wish that we just got a story of some chick reincarnating and taking care of some small girl without any guy being a love interest. I'd especially love it if the chick went adventuring with the girl. I don't like dropping stories. So I thought I'd just get to the currently released chapters and be done with this story. But I had to force myself to get to chapter 10. Keep In mindthat I'm not the targeted demographic for this type of story. A girl might read this story and find it to be a magnificent piece of art, But not me.
The Romance is one of the most awkward and forced romances I've seen and is exactly what I don't like out of female romances. The guy is either one of three things. A complete Douche, A complete Pansy or has no personality besides some blank responses and the author tries selling that as a personality.
The Romance has no time to build up. The Maid/MC has no reason to like this dude. Hell, She should be despising him cause the first time she see's the little girl, She's been tied up by ropes thrown into a small room underground with the only light being some Magic formation he made. This guy isn't sweet or endearing. But a total asshole.
I'm not even kidding. This dude gags this 8 or 9-Year-Old looking girl then ties her up without any humans nearby in case of an emergency If I remember correctly, He also wasn't feeding her or if then barely. I've read some bad LN with douche Male Love interest characters, I.e "Swamp Girl" or " My Disciple Died Yet Again" But as far as I remember, This takes the cake for the most annoying Male Love Interest.
Overall, This story is just filled with wasted potential and wasted potential is worse than no potential IMO.