First off, the two characters get too familiar with each other too fast. Second off, why are the characters taking showers with each other when they're supposed to be strangers? Third off, why does one of the main characters have D-cup-sized breasts? Fourth off, why is the kid shoving her face into the D cup breasts even though they're supposed to be strangers? The huge breasts are a fetish of the author since she did it multiple times in various stories, and the characters don't have much personality. The story is a waste of money, time, and energy, and shouldn't be read by most people.