Grand Prize: Unrivalled Harem Ticket · review
The first 10-12 chapters are honestly really boring. The pacing is slow. Nothing interesting really happens. The characters are boring. The plot is boring. The way that the world works is cliche and you've seen it all before. But once I got past that point, I found I just couldn't stop reading. It very quickly became peak. Part of it is because the beginning chapters are much longer than they had any business being in the beginning. But the story very quickly solidifies itself. The characters all have their own distinct personalities, and they each have several personality traits. they have relationships with each other.The writing is like a 6 or 7 but the main character and eleonair are just extremely fun and heavily carry it. The story is essentially just a cycle of the MC being like "man I really want more women in my harem", and then he goes and gets more women in his harem, plus like plot stuff. The plot is fine and it servers the vibe of the series. It can be comedic at times, but the author doesn't let comedy slow the plot or ruin dramatic moments. The worldbuilding is a bit forgettable, but once again it serves the vibe of the series well. Enough to be intriguing but not so in your face that it's suffocating.