Overall, there are good things about this. The story of the characters in the beginning is a compelling one. It makes you curious, and encourages you to read more. The art is also rather good, and some of the stylistic elements are very creative and unique. However it suffers from a really big issue, and thats just how slow it wants to take the story. It's hard to see the progression in the story, when the characters keep hesitating and choose inaction, and it begins to just feel like a long winding road to nothing. You start expecting for nothing to happen, and your expectations are met.It's likely that many people will get stuck right around the middle of this story, but if this slowness is something you're okay with, perhaps this will be nice.