That sounds like a refreshing change of pace! It's rare to find a story that stays grounded in its premise instead of escalating into another "save the world" trope. Here are a few ways to fix the grammar, depending on how formal you want to be: Option 1: Natural & Conversational (Best for a review or comment) "This was an unexpectedly good manhwa. Lately, a lot of series have featured overpowered protagonists and 'saving the world' plots where the stakes don't even feel real. Here, the plot starts very simply: a guy is annoyed by the noise his upstairs neighbors are making, and they turn out to begangsters. It spirals out from there. I don't think I've seen such a premise before. The story knows exactly what it is and doesn't try to be anything else; that's why it works.